Cynthia, The Dimensional Traveler

[TangAce]

mmmh, I was more thinking she was an apprentice before getting the orb, and that the accident is what made her quit maybe
I don't think it's good she was bullied nor is vengeful, was thinking she was an apprentice since she's a little child, then an accident, then she quit, then war begin
something like that

it's a shame no one else is helping x)

[DaddyOoker]

With the forum in it's current state (stupid SSL login message) it's understandable that there isn't much input.

Cynthia, an only child, became an apprentice (WHY?) in the capital before the magistrate split up with the paladins. Due to an accident during Atlas' weapon testing she ended up with an orb that exists across multiple dimensions that only she is able to control. Cynthia discovered that the orb causes destruction to any living thing that it passes through. She also learned that the orb allows her to travel from a dimension to another. After some time as being an apprentice she found that the capital's ideology didn't align with her own. Now, when necessary, she fights alone against the magistrate and the paladins.

[TangAce]

okay this seems pretty good
and abut this why, simply cause her parents put her here maybe?


should we post it on reddit?
the post has over 1000 views tho

i'll start making cards ideas

[broccolitim]

A BK like champion with a boomerang like weapon is a good idea. The idea leaving the orb in the air for so long is like throwing Imani dragons. You are going to get killed some time. Instead you throwing a drone-orb, maybe a medium ranged straight throw with a a little of a faster projectile speed as BK's bombs is the right idea?
And the RMB can be used for retreating it. 500 might be a lot of damage then...
A Seris like flat-ish disc orb that has a slow fire rate. Or maybe a fast fire rate! Why not decrease the damage going to 300, and you're able to throw maybe for orbs before returning them at the same time. A slower projectile speed would make sense then. And retracting a your orbs slows them in the air for a little moment before going back.
I hope you understood everything .

maybe I went a little bit too far...

[DaddyOoker]

should we post it on reddit?

It's up to you.

[Grinsleeper]

Ooh, i like the idea of being able to change the direction of your lmb with your crosshair.

[TangAce]

A BK like champion with a boomerang like weapon is a good idea. The idea leaving the orb in the air for so long is like throwing Imani dragons. You are going to get killed some time. Instead you throwing a drone-orb, maybe a medium ranged straight throw with a a little of a faster projectile speed as BK's bombs is the right idea?
And the RMB can be used for retreating it. 500 might be a lot of damage then...
A Seris like flat-ish disc orb that has a slow fire rate. Or maybe a fast fire rate! Why not decrease the damage going to 300, and you're able to throw maybe for orbs before returning them at the same time. A slower projectile speed would make sense then. And retracting a your orbs slows them in the air for a little moment before going back.
I hope you understood everything .

maybe I went a little bit too far...

yes I understood everything
when I created the concept I thought about doing something like that, but I wanted something fast paced, also, having multiple orbs up in the air around the map would be difficult to do, there would be places you wouldn't see much for exemple, also the gameplay would be more like a dredge, zoning, I wanted something that could be played aggressive
then the orb isn't meant to stay somewhere in the map for very long, it's your only weapon so if you don't have it and for exemple a flank attacks you, you'll probably die

the damage seems fine if you compare it to other damage champ, just at very close range the dps would be a bit much but it's dangerous to be close to someone and if the dude moves then you'll miss the rmb so the dps isn't that much
And it's not like imani's dragon, cause you can still move while you shoot or while the orb is far away, it's more like a seris' orb but tinier faster and you can influence it's direction

Anyway I won't change the base kit mechanics, the numbers might change if something is too op or up, but not the mechanics

it's up to you.

I never go on reddit xD

Ooh, i like the idea of being able to change the direction of your lmb with your crosshair.

Glad you like it then

good to have some feedbacks

[DaddyOoker]

I have a few comments on reddit but that's it. I can't say I would want to be responsible for keeping two boards synced up. Just leave it here. If someone wants to contribute they can figure out how to login here: http://forums.paladins.com/showthrea...ver-the-forums

[TangAce]

and i'm back, gonna update it, and make cards

[TangAce]

Updated to add cards
will improve post by adding colors and such soon
please tell me if some cards sounds OP or UP (or if anything sounds OP in her kit)

still missing cards name and artworks, help would be appreciated, especially for artworks