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    Unhappy Joshua, the Last Stand

    After being inactive for so long, Now I got a new idea for my new champion.

    P.S: This concept is based on my life's story, but not all of them are true to make it fits to the realm.

    In fact, Joshua is my first name

    Lore: Joshua was a great boy but he after he failed to make things right, he is now just a "poor" version of everybody else But one day, a young girl named Bishop helped him to get out of the problems. But she also had problems too, so Joshua helped her and eventually they become great friends. But soon Bishop found out that Joshua was not a good man (because he lost everything) and she just doesn't want people to judge them as a "couple", so Bishop tried to stay away from Joshua but he already felt comfortable with her. Then she wanted to get rid of him and Joshua didn't notice until it's just too late. Bishop got angry with Joshua and she left Joshua forever by joining the Magistrate. Joshua felt that Bishop was gone because of him but after he knew that she destroyed all of his remaining legacy, he hated her and tried to find his own solution. He then got into the Abyss and wanted to fight against Bishop, but he got defeated by her and eventually Furia saved him from the darkness. After a long time being purified by Furia, he gained a lot of power and now he fight against Bishop again, as a Paladins.

    Class: Front Line
    HP: 4800
    Speed: 380

    LMB/R2: Dual Shotgun
    Joshua has a dual shotgun that fires 15 shells that deals 40 damage each. He fires both of them at the same time.
    No headshot, 1200 max damage. Fires every 1,4 seconds. Has 7 ammo. The spread is the same as Buck's shotgun

    RMB/L2: Hip Storm (14)
    Fires 10 charges of shotgun that has shorter range and "crazier" spread. Dealing 600 damage each charge.
    6.000 max damage.

    F/R1: Hand of Power (16)
    Joshua stretch his hands and make a barrier that has 5.000 health. Last for 6 seconds.
    Size is the same as Barik's barricade.

    Q/L1: Astonishing Fury
    Shout to all of the alive champions. And it has 2 different outcome:
    Scream to allies: Get 20% MS, and 20% ultimate charge
    Scream to enemies: Got crippled and deals 20% less damage
    He got 20% damage increase and reduce all CD by 20%
    all effects lasts 4 seconds

    E/Triangle: Catastrophe
    Joshua becomes an unstable and powerful light that obliterate all of the enemies around him. Then he leap towards the highest health enemy and execute it.
    Deals 3.000 damage. Has 1.5 second activation time. He is immune during the activation time.

    Talent:
    One more light (Armor) (45)
    After he died, he came back with a light beam around him that deals 500 damage. He came back with 2.000 health

    Protector (Hand of Power)
    Hand of Power now is circular and can't be walked through. Also, gain 2.000 more health but has 50% longer CD.

    Wrong Hand (Weapon)
    Fires the shotgun one at a time and change all of the stats.

    Numbers of shell is now 20 instead of 15
    Fires every 1 seconds instead of 1.4 seconds
    Has 8 ammo instead of 7
    Damage is now 35 instead of 40

    P.S: It has longer range and less spread too



    Voice Line: (it's not complete)

    Introduction
    Let's kill them
    I'll show them that I'm the chosen one

    Death Sound: (when killed by Bishop)
    So you don't love me then
    Actually, I don't hate you

    Kill Taunt:
    Bishop
    I have to this, I'm sorry

    Khan
    That's for destroying Bishop

    Furia
    I don't know what to do
    Ultimate Line: I HAVE THE POWER!!!!

    That's all for now. Also, I'll make Bishop soon
    Last edited by Evanstanislass; 03-09-2019 at 09:47 AM.
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    Added more voice line
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    Hmm. I want to review this but I'd like to know if you are fine with a harsh review before I do. If not I'll just say a couple of things but I can do a much more serious review if you don't mind some harsh feedback.
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    Quote Originally Posted by JohnOfAllTrades View Post
    Hmm. I want to review this but I'd like to know if you are fine with a harsh review before I do. If not I'll just say a couple of things but I can do a much more serious review if you don't mind some harsh feedback.
    I won't mind
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