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    Yami, The Celestial Queen

    Yami, The Celestial Queen
    Role: Front Line
    Health: 3500

    Appearance: Yami is a moderately tall woman with long blonde hair and pale skin. She sits on her throne made out of obsidian and white diamonds. She is protected by her celestial guards, soldiers made out of tendrils of shadow. While she is not on her throne she transforms her throne into a magical staff that she uses to fight.

    Abilities

    Left-Click: Celestial Guard/Celestial Staff
    Command: Yami directs her celestial guards to throw a volley of javelins, with the guards alternating their throws. Each guard throws a javelin that deals 150 damage every second, with a 0.25s delay between the attacks of the guards. Each guard has 1000 health and stands at a set location around her. Yami's reload replaces any destroyed celestial guards and whenever every guard is destroyed she is forced to reload. Yami may still attack with alive guards while reloading.(Celestial guards count as deployables. Celestial guards take 50% reduced blast damage.)
    Conquer: Yami charges up her staff, forming a ring of 8 shadow balls before releasing it. Each shadow ball deals 100 damage. Charging up the staff longer makes the circles smaller, reducing the spread of the shadow balls.
    Celestial Guards: 5
    Celestial Staff Ammo: 5

    Right-Click: Command and Conquer
    Yami switches between stances. While in her Command stance she may not move but gains 1500 max health.

    Q: Commanding Presence/Conquer The Weak
    Command: Yami summons an array of 6 celestial wizards in a ring around her and directs them to channel their magic into a shield around her and her guards. The shield has 2500 health and regains 500 health every second. Each wizard has 1000 health and whenever the wizards are all destroyed the shield is destroyed. (This does not go on cooldown until after the shield has been destroyed.)
    Conquer: Yami slams the base of her staff on the ground, sending out a wave of shadows that stuns nearby enemies for 0.5s for every 20% of their health that is missing.
    Cooldown: 10s

    F: Falling Sky/Shooting Star
    Command: Yami teleports herself a short distance into the air, dropping her throne onto the ground. Enemies in the area are knocked back and take 300 damage.
    Conquer: Yami engulfs herself in shadow before launching herself through the air in an arch. Enemies hit by her take 400 damage. (The angle of the arch may be affected by Yami's aim.)
    Cooldown: 8s

    E: Celestial Titan
    Yami opens a rift and calls down the fist of her kingdom's celestial titan, dealing 800 damage in an area. Enemies hit by the fist are disarmed and silenced for 2s while enemies in a large area around it are silenced and disarmed for 1s.

    Cards

    Legendary/Talents:

    Heavy Throne - Falling Sky now stuns enemies in the area for 1s and has it's cooldown reduced by 2s.

    Meteorite - Enemies hit by Shooting Star are now pulled with you and take an additional 300 damage upon landing.

    Queen Of The Edge - Celestial Titan now has two charges but deals 400 less damage. Additionally, Celestial Titan charges 50% faster.

    Armor/Weapon:

    Asteroid Belt - Enemies within 30 units of you take 20/40/60/80/100 damage every second.

    Slingshot Orbit - Getting an elimination increases the movement speed of all allies that participated by 5/10/15/20/25% for 2s.

    Stardust Crusader - You gain 10/20/30/40/50% lifesteal while below 50% health.

    Dying Star - You gain Crowd Control immunity for 3s whenever you drop below 15/20/25/30/35% health. (Cooldown: 15s)

    Command and Conquer:

    Light In The Dark - Each Celestial Guard gains a 100/200/300/400/500 health shield that lasts for 2s after switching to your Command stance. (Cooldown: 10s)

    Weary Queen - Switching to your Command stance within 2s of getting a kill or an elimination heals you for 200/400/600/800/1000 health. (Cooldown: 20s)

    Demanding - Celestial Staff charges 20/40/60/80/100% faster for 2s after switching to your Conquer stance.

    Conquered Stars - You gain 15/30/45/60/75% lifesteal for 2s after switching to your Conquer stance.

    Commanding Presence/Conquer The Weak:

    Solar Eclipse - The shield from Commanding Presence heals for an additional 50/100/150/200/250 health every second.

    Dark Thoughts - Each wizard from Commanding Presence has it's health increased by 40/80/120/160/200.

    Setting Sun - Activating Conquer The Weak generates 1/2/3/4/5 ammo.

    Hopeless Struggle - Kills and eliminations reduce the cooldown of Conquer The Weak by 0.4/0.8/1.2/1.6/2s.

    Falling Sky/Shooting Star:

    Night And Day - Dropping below 30% health reduces the cooldown of Falling Sky by 20/40/60/80/100%. (Cooldown: 10s)

    Out Of Space - Falling Sky has it's radius increased by 10/20/30/40/50%.

    Meteor Shower - Hitting and enemy with Shooting Star reduces its cooldown by 0.8/1.6/2.4/3.2/4s.

    Awestruck - Activating Shooting Star gives you a 100/200/300/400/500 health shield for 3s.

    Animations and Poses

    Intro: Yami's throne falls from the sky and she rises from it.

    Reload: Yami raises her hand, opening portals for more celestial gaurd to come through.

    Emote 1 - Default: Yami stretches and yawns.

    Emote 2 - I Require A Drink: Yami snaps, opening a small portal. A hand made of shadow then reaches through and hands her a glass of wine. She drinks it and tosses the glass behind her, opening a portal for the glass to fall into.

    Emote 3 - Courtesy: Yami bows her head and stretches out her hand. A celestial guard then appears and kisses her hand.

    Victory Pose 1 - Default: Yami stands in front of her throne, ready to fight.

    Victory Pose 2 - Listless: Yami sits, lazily reclining in her throne.

    Victory Pose 3 - Night Crew: Yami stands with her back to the back of her throne, looking over her shoulder. Two celestial guards slav squat in front of the throne, holding their javelins over the shoulder.

    Voice Lines

    Intro 1 - "Bow before your queen."
    Intro 2 - "I do not wish to drag this out."
    Mount - "I'd rather be on my throne...."
    Command And Conquer (Switching to Command) 1 - "Time to take a back seat."
    Command And Conquer (Switching to Command) 2 - "I am not required for this."
    Command And Conquer (Switching to Conquer) 1 - "I'll just have to do it myself."
    Command And Conquer (Switching to Conquer) 2 - *sigh* "I always end up doing it in the end."
    Commanding Presence 1 - "Come forth my mages!"
    Commanding Presence 2 - "Ward off their attacks!"
    Conquer The Weak 1 - "To your knees!"
    Conquer The Weak 2 - "Bow your head mortals!"
    Falling Sky 1 - "I need a better view."
    Falling Sky 2 - "Push forward!"
    Shooting Star 1 - "Follow my lead!"
    Shooting Star 2 - "Take to the sky!"
    Celestial Titan 1 - "Witness your doom!"
    Celestial Titan 2 - "They are in awe of our power!"
    Purchase Item [Defense 1] - "Encased upon my throne."
    Purchase Item [Defense 2] - "Underarmor. To keep my beauty untouched."
    Purchase Item [Defense 3] - "From my king's own collection."
    Purchase Item [Utility 1] - "I can see the luster within this."
    Purchase Item [Utility 2] - "Beauty beyond the realm of imagination."
    Purchase Item [Utility 3] - "I hold the heavens in my hand."
    Purchase Item [Healing 1] - "A glimpse of hope."
    Purchase Item [Healing 2] - "A star begins anew."
    Purchase Item [Healing 3] - "From the stardust we will always return."
    Purchase Item [Attack 1] - "Entertain me."
    Purchase Item [Attack 2] - "The stars bear down on them."
    Purchase Item [Attack 3] - "Galaxies pale before my might!"
    Using Down Ability 1 - "This takes time."
    Using Down Ability 2 - "Even I must take breaks."
    Burning - "This is EXACTLY why I didn't want to do this."
    Stunned - "Oof... Give me a moment."
    Low Health - "I feel as if the weight of the world is on my shoulders."
    Healed - "May your deed be written in the stars!"
    Death 1 - "I'm just going to close my eyes... for a moment..."
    Death 2 - "My king.... My life.... I cherish you"
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    Blue is the command stance.

    Yellow is the conquer stance.

    Purple is general information.

    Added lore bit: Yami is the wife of my Darius, Lord of the Edge concept
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    pretty cool champ, and i like the different stances , not OP or UP
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    Bet she tastes good
    Cards are ready
    Mom's spaghetti

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sargeras666 View Post
    Bet she tastes good
    Yum
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    Quote Originally Posted by Saiken62 View Post
    pretty cool champ, and i like the different stances , not OP or UP
    Thanks, I'm glad you like it!

    Quote Originally Posted by Sargeras666 View Post
    Bet she tastes good
    ....Wut? I'm not sure how to respond to that.
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    You named her ''Yami'' almost the same as ''Yummy'' or ''Yum''
    Hi

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    Quote Originally Posted by IvJo View Post
    You named her ''Yami'' almost the same as ''Yummy'' or ''Yum''
    Is that really what he meant? Well, if that's what he meant (and for those who don't know), yami means dark.
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    Now this is a proper form-changing champion concept.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Harlequin98 View Post
    Now this is a proper form-changing champion concept.
    I'm glad you like it!

    Also, is this a slight burn directed at a certain recent concept?
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